TheDevilMyself's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Short 2 Natural History]

SQUIDS RULE!

Squids FTW

also, lovin' the homage to Monty Python

[My Art]

hmm

Honestly, i was expecting something worse than this.

As others have stated, there is an art portal.

Also, you need to figure out what the "stop music" command in actionscript is and use it, just before the "start music" so it doesn't overlap like it does. It's kind of annoying.

Otherwise, not the worst art in the world, especially for your age. Keep it up - make some animations!

yoman333 responds:

Thanks! =D

[Kirby The Goomba]

erm

Just because i like Kirby i gave it a 1.

[Fish Puncher!]

Diggin' it!

My favorite part - when Mungo goes off the finished background to get a running start hehe...

Things i didn't like...
Others mentioned speed... in a couple areas you over-animated some motions, making them longer than they should have been. It's a pain in the ass mistake, but it's there.

Sheriff? Why? He could just as easily be just another fisherman and it would have worked the same. That said, if he's gotta be a sheriff he should have a star and a gun imo.

That's about it, though. I liked it. And for those who thought it was too violent... well, lets just say that they never watched ren & stimpy as kids. This wasn't violent at all.

[Testing Preloader]

Another suggestion along the same lines as therest

Good pre-loader. As the others have mentioned, it's not exactly what you should be posting on NG.

SO, i suggest you make a Deviant Art account and upload it there - then ya go on the forums and look for some criticism.

Oh and there's a little white speck on the top left corner of the tank box.

[typografie Ik was erbij]

Excellent

Y'know, sure, i barely understand most of the song, but i thoroughly wish that more people would take the time out to have some fun with the lyrics on the whoe "x" by "y" with Lyrics! on youtube, newgrounds etc... it's refreshing. Keep it up!!

[a long dark road]

Short - repeating

animation's decent. It's a bit short, the credits are a bit long and a bit un-readable.

The animation loops. For gods sake, people, stop! the! movie!

Flesh out a longer script and try again and please please please stop the thing at the end and put a replay button.

[8 bit crunch]

My eyes hurt

This could have been good.

It loops at the end. Bad bad bad.

The intro made me smile in anticipation then you ditched the 8-bit and went full on flash. Remake it all in 8-Bit and then we'll talk.

DJWOJO responds:

Unlike other people, I will agree with your criticism. That's a valid point. I will take this into consideration forfuture animations.

[Shovelface]

Potentially good

Your animation style is great - and i love the attention you paid to the background. These things will win over people....

When you actually try.

Learn a little action script... gotoandstop gotoandplay etc.... it's not hard, and it stops your animation from repeating itself over and over.

Stating the obvious - it's too short.

Also, it does not linger on the shovel long enough.

I could go on forever picking this apart, but it's obvious you just didn't spend any time on it. If it's just a sketch, send it to DA, not NG...

Hope you keep at it, and come up with a bigger better flash. It takes time, but you can do it.

[Pit-man]

Add audio and we got a deal.

This could really use some audio. Get creative with it! Also, learn to use stop functions and make buttons... actionscript is your friend!