Minute Movement Issue
Great little flash - gotta love the random head clapping crap!
The only thing that really bugged me was how the snow trails didn't line up with their feet. If you fixed that, it would be perfect.
I hear getting bored and impatient, but think about all the great stuff on this site, and imagine that YOU should be part of that too, no?
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21,204,528.5 Box Tops
hehe... i disagree with Cajunspirit - i think the voice acting was better than most of the junk you hear around here, so keep up the good work. I also liked the graphics, though the animation WAS a little chunky. And of COURSE the humor is for insiders - it's part of a SERIES!
I DID, however think that it could go a little faster at parts, specifically the introduction, but also some of the slower parts of the episode. Also also i think there should be some goofy background music during the episode, but eh, what can you do?
=D= -Keep up the good work!
Lip Syncing
Her lips keep going after the voice is done, like some sort of cheap Japanese horror movie... And a few points of the animations could be smoothed out. I know it's hard to take all the time out to go over it all using a mouse and all, but overall it's a pretty good job!
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hanks for the review
i think
Bad Clicking! Bad!
Decent enough except for the fact that it's stick figures in the first place... seriously, it doesn't take much to give a stick some flesh. Review a few drawing tutorials if you've got the time - maybe you'll learn a thing or two!
The song was pretty cool, but the buttons were horrid. Double click on the button in Mac. Flash, insert a keyframe under 'hit' and draw where you want the clickable area to be; this eliminates the clicking problem of "i can only click EXACTLY on the letters (wtf)!"
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IllWillPress Isn't Dead
Have you been there today? It's still going... i'm tired of these 'tribute' movies... and i know, your animations had nothing to do with illwillpress, but that doesn't excuse you. The animations themselves were shoddy and short, with the crowd chasing a bagel probably the best of the bunch. Is this a daily thing you do or something? I kind of get that vibe from it. Man you have too much time on your hands if that is the case! haha... (right, though i WISH i had that much free time)
Foamy lives on!
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Foamy Sucks!
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Ahhh Hoo Hoo Hoo Hoooey!
Wile-E-Coyote? hehe couldn't help but make the relation...
So are you saying that though the 'i think i can' principle is relevant, gravity always wins? Social commentary... heh
Didn't have the music that 'Loving' boasted, unfortunately, but was non-the-less a good short.
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Oddities in Eating
Wow. I just don't know about how you didn't have a point where the 'eating music' continued on... the clips don't do it much justice alone. And perhaps the effect of the eating could be accented visually... like flipping the colors or something... maybe that could be seen as defeating the purpose of the minimals, but i think it could be done minimally...
Anyways, very strange animation indeed... gives some insight into the creators mind, maybe?
hehe
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WAAAAH!!!
Great stuff - a little non-linear at times, but still greatly good and goodly great. "I'll be the shovel!" Classic. I really dug the music especially, though - cleverly used.
Keep up the good work!
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Lincoln, eh?
Hey, i'm from Lincoln too! Go figure... that was random.
Anyways, i'm digging your flash. Better than alot of sprite ones i've seen lately, but i think you should take some time out to work on learning yourself some pixel art for those few instances where you have to fabricate something for yourself. It's not so hard, really... just time consuming, but since you rely alot on the sprites as-is, you shouldn't have any problems dedicating a little more time to the flash.
Oh, and i noticed a clickable area problem on the main menu... had to try a couple of times to get it to work.
Keep up the good work!
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Lincoln pride! lol. But yeah..i've been up for like 22 hours and when i've been up this long and i try editing my flashes...bad things tend to happen. lol. I'll be sure to keep up the good work man! thanks for the review! :D :D :D!
Blood Guts and Gore! More More More!
I love it hahaha the excessive violence would be one thing, but the taking off of the head and scaring the little child is something ELSE! You outdid my own expectations (and i loved the alternate ending)... Nelly i don't like, though. ha! But it's good enough for me that you gave credit for it.
I enjoy the shakey animation, whether it's on purpose or not i don't care so much, but i dig it!
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