Half Full
It's a pity you got bored with it because it's really good. You need to finish it! Finish and speed up a few of the parts, can't think of what specifically since i'm watching TV as well and it is very distracting.................................
yes, anyways, if you want me to tell you which spots, just say so, i'll let you know.
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Glad you thought it was good. :)
I don't know what you mean by spots... But ok...
Most recent version of critiqueing
Since i read your reply to the last comment, i think that you possibly have actually tried to make this movie, and that something just went terribly wrong. You might want to check your version check actionscript, or make sure YOU have the latest versions yourself!
The thumbnail made me think that maybe this would be really cool, so i hope it works in the re-submit!
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Yeah, I guess i'll have to resubmit, no one seems to be able to see it. I can though, and some of my friends I sent it to said the same. I hope they weren't being lying jerks. >:(
Sherlock Holmes and the Case of the Missing Heads
Where are their heads? The gore was fine, the timing was good, the animation was short and the heads were missing. Where are they??
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It's a style! besides, heads are overatted anyway...
Couple of things...
First, i think the mouse icon should revert when you get to the movie part, because it's just distracting! Second, i think the whole bit needs to be more linear - maybe have a collective plot or something? And, as always, i think people need to learn how to do pixel art, but that's just my opinion.
The rest of it was really good - i liked the mario thing, but the Goomba seemed to be missing a few pixels when it walked, and that part could have REALLY used extra pixel art for the gun and the crater.... that would look really impressive. The sound was kind of lacking, but maybe that's just because i'm really tired and not in the mood for it?
Any way you look at it, it was a pretty decent submission and i'm betting it'll go through, and i'd like to see future collabs from you guys!
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R- Thanks for the tips! we will keep them in mind for our next collabs.
You did everything RIGHT
For ONCE, someone gave credit to everything they used, animated what needed animated and left the rest to rot. You even rated it appropriately! I do think that that particular theme is a little over-used for flash, so that brought my rating down a bit, but i did at least attempt to save this.
Personal though - though putting a cock on it might be considered hardcore(?) maybe stick a knife or something in its place and have him gouging the ________ etc.
Good stuff - good humor - a little slow or draw out at times, maybe put in some stuff that would kill epileptics, ya?
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Thanks for the review. I intentionally avoided explicit imagery to avoid that AO rating. But, since this one seems to be going over well, I might get nastier in the future. The knife idea is funny, though. It can get a bit boring. Perhaps it could have used some seizure inducing images. Thank you for the advice!
Picked Up Poor Sound Quality
I agree with the guy before me - but i have a solution - kill the sound on the video completely and replace it with all bond sounds.
I love the idea - i don't know if it's original or not, but it's a first for me!
Oh and a technical problem - your "PLAY" button shows underneath the video... to fix that real easy just put the preloader in a seperate scene... helps alot if you do that, well, always.
Keep up the good work! I'll be watching!
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Ahh so thats how we fix that. Thanks alot for the advice. Doing totally original sounds isnt a bad idea, it would be extremely difficult however. We might try that for future missions!
Interactivity could use some work
What's the point in a pause button? I'm not too big of a fan of the blob people, but the script made up for it! And the voice of newgrounds... hehe nice work.
Entertaining, but you could tell you just cut it short because you were 'done' doing it, right? That's no excuse!
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If you have no life, such as myself, you can pause and read the newspaper. And suggestions noted, thank you.
Random Short No FPS
Your FPS is too low - try 25+... choppy animations are really easy to make, so people expect more out of one. Personally i think that if you spent hours on it, you should spend a few more and complete the song. Y'know? To me it seems like the whole thing is really a music video and it makes no sense to end the video before the song ends.
Fun little animations, though - i like how they flow!
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thanks for that feedback i like when people give honest opinions of my work most of it crap tbh i will continue with this just for you!!!!
Lip Syncing
Her lips keep going after the voice is done, like some sort of cheap Japanese horror movie... And a few points of the animations could be smoothed out. I know it's hard to take all the time out to go over it all using a mouse and all, but overall it's a pretty good job!
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hanks for the review
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IllWillPress Isn't Dead
Have you been there today? It's still going... i'm tired of these 'tribute' movies... and i know, your animations had nothing to do with illwillpress, but that doesn't excuse you. The animations themselves were shoddy and short, with the crowd chasing a bagel probably the best of the bunch. Is this a daily thing you do or something? I kind of get that vibe from it. Man you have too much time on your hands if that is the case! haha... (right, though i WISH i had that much free time)
Foamy lives on!
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Foamy Sucks!
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