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Great work!

I can see how much went into this... and i'm glad that you didn't skimp out on any of it (which is the tendency for such long pieces) And i applaud you for submitting it here, even though i too wonder if the cruelty shown here is homophobic as well...

I love the fantasizing pictures - fun stuff! I'm not homo or metro sexual but i've had plenty of friends who are and can always take on their perspective if i choose -

Cool song, too!
Keep it up!

D

Not as good as the first one..

You kinda lost me at the end there... maybe you should have recorded more samples of him calling for his friend because the same one over and over just wasn't sitting well in my ears.

Then i think that ending it as such probably wasn't the greatest of ideas, not without a "to be continued" or anything especially, but i think there really should have been more to the flash.

Finally i'll just say how the jumpiness of the mouths is pretty cool, but the super lack of correct shaping of the mouths irks me.

Other than that, i like the storyline and for the most part, the script - i actually was excited to see what this one had in store for me, and i'm sure it'll be the same for the next one!

Keep 'em comin'!

D

Basking-Shark responds:

thanks friend, i hope you like the next one, did you like the new name the Free-Dumbs ? hope to hear from u soon,

B_S

Half Assed

Y'know, you sit there and say it's going to be blammed and it probably
will. I for one voted to save it simply because of the graphics. They're really good! If you had a storyline or something maybe it would be better... also more sounds and music etc.... there's alot that could make this flash better, but the graphics were at least good.

The other guy had it right - it's like an e-card, and no, that's not enough to satisfy the newgrounders. If you want to submit flash for art's sake, submit it to DeviantArt. You probably wont' get half as many views or comments there, but those who do might appreciate it more.

=D=

Resubmission...

Listen, if your crappy flash got blammed for WHATEVER reason, that doesn't mean it's going to do any better the SECOND time around. Hell, if you're going to resubmit, it'd be more to your advantage to WAIT a day or so before doing it, then you'll probably get DIFFERENT VOTERS than those who voted the FIRST TIME AROUND, like myself.

See you in the Obits

=D=

Melior responds:

Oh dear mr Devil man is insulting me! What ever shall I do? Oh fuck you.

Joooooooooooohn!!!!!!!!

haha Great stuff, as usual - i think the only thing i could really criticize in this was the transition from the "foot in the face" scene to the "Mike McNanner (sp?)" end scene... The other guy just seemed to appear out of nowhere, and i think it might have been slightly more effective to have had him walk idly into the scene, or even, better yet, have made him be the guy who bumped between them in the beginning hahaha yeah, that'd be great..

Anyways, great stuff - always quality video, funny sounds, good voices... but gateway? *sigh*

Keep it up!

=D=

Knox responds:

yeah i probably shouldnt timed that last part better..bleh, i get so sloppy when im near the end x___x

I give it a Zero... Again.

Why did you feel you must submit this again? There aren't any improvements you could have made in an hour to make this submission any better! Maybe you spent the hour thinking through your clever description? Or whacking off?

Either way, enjoy yourself in BLAM HELL!

D

grijsklokje responds:

No, actually, it was 3-3.5 hours. Also, I wasn't whacking off nor thinking it through. I was at soccertraining, because I myself, have better things to do then just write stupid reviews to other's people work.
And thank you, I sure will enjoy myself in blam hell! I'll see you there I guess, let's have a big orgy!

'One' thing

Lip synching was good, but you have too much tounge for the 'O' sound in 'ONE' if you sing it, you notice your tounge is back in your mouth, not out there in front... that's why it's looking so awkward.

Otherwise, the graphics were great, but i couldn't get the second guitar to work (?) maybe i'm just not patient enough. Thinking of making the guitars work, maybe you should have a little note at the bottom telling the viewer to click on the guitars for the songs, eh?

Good synching, though... lets see some more intense stuff next time, eh?

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ConstableMurtis responds:

thanks to everyone who posted a review

A few notes.

Hey, first off, you don't have to create the scenes in order. Just make a new scene called "LOADER" and put the preloader in it, then drag it to the TOP of the scene list.

Second, we could do without that song... the one that was playing when the people were running around on the map - everybody uses it. Find something different.

Third, the graphic of the zombie thing or whatever it was had that white border around it from a crappy cut job. You could take the time out to take that out if you're going to use it through the whole thing.

Fourth, your frame rate was mind numbingly low. If this was, like the other guy suggested, trying to show all the flaws in morrowind, you really could have done a better job portraying it.

EFFORT. You need it!

D

incative-account responds:

first: thats probably flash 8 cos i dont have no freaking scenes list to move about >_>

second: that song is the only decent one for a random chase scene!

third: i had a glitch on my morrowind game that made the dremoras have white outlines around them (thats a dremora fewl!) so i decided to leave a white outline!

fourth: any higher and the sound wouldve been out of sync

EFFORT: i put loads into this

JNMC

P.S: i pity the foo who messes with JNMC/T

...it wasn't even finished...

Why would you submit an unfinished stick fight? Jeezus! And what does that song have to do with war? I mean, come on... Stick fights sometimes make it through because there's SO MUCH HAPPENING, and because there was obvious effort (aside from the stick figures) put into it. If you just prolonged this flash, it may have made it - your background shows that maybe you spent about 30 minutes in total, but since you cut the damn thing short and didn't bother to add to your 'plot', you fail fail fail.

Float on THIS
D

REM Sucks

That's possibly the best music i've ever heard from REM. Ah well. I think that you needed more variety in your music. Maybe look for something from one of the newgroudns musicians, or have them make something specifically for your flash, because, i feel, right when he chops off the head, the music stops fitting the flash and starts becoming just annoying background noise. It picks up again later on, but for a while there it just doesn't work.

The animation was great, except for the truck driving off... maybe you should animate it driving left behind the wall and then animate a 'distance' truck crossing over the hills and whatnot... ideas ideas...

Anyways, it was really good - i liked the message - you were in the army? Pity... at least you made it out, no?

THE GUYS HEAD HAD THE MAGIC JELLY BEANS! OOOH I MUST GET THE JELLY BEANS!

=D=

NecroScream responds:

I know that there is room for improvement, thanks for the tips.

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